✌✌✌✌ Happy birthday✔ 😘

This is the original document that has still been sitting on my computer. This is for those who want to easily read the essay and don't care about my faked "graded" comments. Enjoy!

the original "graded" version of the essay is in the pictures. (They are out of order SORRY! Read them in order or it wont make no sense ya feel me?)
If all you want is to read the original document of the essay I just posted it under files. Enjoy!

The teacher comments are funny as also, especially when he recognizes how funny the twain part is. The essay has an excellent wit, especially if he artfully mistook "William Goldman" for the book's author. His description of Golding fits Goldman's style perfectly. If it was an accident, I have to say that is one hilarious dumbass!

I am absolutely obsessed with Lord of the Flies and this is the best thing ever!!! I will forever reference this essay!!!! *bows down to maker*

you must be one popular dude ;)

Joseph Lopez

OK I WILL TRY AGAIN

JOEY WOEY.....

this paper still cracks me up

You made it to i-am-bored.com I was rolling man, it was awesome.

LEGEND.

A year and a half ago I was totally broke after a business failure. I was miserable had major problems with wife and life was a total disgrace. One day I received an email from an Internet friend he opened my eyes and introduced me this program. What an incredible 18 months its been. punothlx

i just finished reading the book and am going to re-read this essay to see, if possible, it will be even funnier the second time :)

this story changed my life

haha i told u dianaa!

this made my day! lol

i think u got mark twain and michael jackson mixed up